come make it a lil bit realistic please..
the story that have been put together is awesome except for the ending though...
my god i was devastated with the ending is like freaking hell?! why in the world would u leave a story like that . I would accept if the fact that one of them really died though. and SERIOUSLY all the kids are 15? (yeah right ) they look freaking OLDer than that.

but still everything is a good read, but tiring store ur energy for this.
once u read it u can't stop, that's a fact