taiyou no uta(my version)

[SweetArmistice]

this is based from my imagination, hope you'll like it

Taiyo no uta (my version)

New characters
Sato Ikeda
Amaya Ikeda (mother)
Hiroshi Ikeda (father)
Dr. Tatsuya
Dr. Vincent Roberts

You see since my childhood I’ve been ill, I have lung cancer, I’ll live my life to the fullest because I’ve been told that I would die before the age of 18…

16 yrs later…

In a hospital:

Dr. Tatsuya: ma’am based on the latest data your son has still a year to live but as usual there is no cure for the disease and for each day that he is out of the house shortens his life by one day it means that a day for a day if he continues like this then he’s only got 6 months…

Amaya: you hear that Sato?

Sato: yes ma, but still I’ll live my days to the fullest, it doesn’t matter how long I have, I’ll accept my death but death will see me smiling when my time is up…

Amaya: ok Sato it is your life…

Sato: thanks ma

5 months later…

Ken Amane (father): you finally woke up, huh?

Yuki Amane (mother): Are you going out again tonight?

Kaoru: yeah

Ken: you go every single night. Do you really have customers?

Kaoru: yeah two or three people

Ken: then it’s pointless

Kaoru: it’s all right I don’t really care.

Ken: then it can’t be helped. Since it’s a day off today, we’ll stop by and see you.

Kaoru: I’ll kill you if you come

Ken: ok

Yuki: do you know when the moon will come out?

Kaoru: yeah

Yuki: not yeah

Kaoru: 4:40

Yuki: Then you’ve got to be home by 4, at all costs.

Police officer no.1: no matter how you look at it she’s still under-age, right? Shall we put her on custody? Seriously she’s out so late at night.

Police officer no.2: hmm? No that girl is alright. Her parents explained it properly to us.

Police officer no.1: explained?

Police officer no.2: how shall I say it? They said its XP or something. It’s a disease where you’re allergic to ultraviolet light. If you’re exposed to the sun, you’ll die. That’s why that girl can only go out at night.

Ps. From here on out most the things that will happen are based from my imagination… some are from the author of the manga…

Kaoru playing guitar and singing…

Clapping*

Kaoru: clapping?? Who? Where?

Sato: laughing* it’s me who’s clapping, for the song is indeed amazing and of course the singer. I’m a fan.

Kaoru: a fan? I don’t have fans.

Sato: you don’t have fans but you have a fan, me, your very own fan.

Kaoru: laughing*

Sato: can you sing again?

Kaoru: um sure…

Kaoru sings again

Sato: waaaa claps very fast and loud*. Amazing, amazing.

Kaoru: really?

Sato: yes, oops got to go, goodbye, see you again next time. You are still going to perform here right?

Kaoru: yes, um you are?

Sato: running* looks back* no need for names, I’ll tell you next time goodbye. Next time I’ll ask for your autograph.

Kaoru: my fan? Laughing while playing another song*


i'll put up the continuation later

[SweetArmistice]

Kaoru after singing

Looks at a bench*

Thinking* (this is the bench he sat on)

Sits*

Glances at her right side, imagining*(a boy she sees in the morning is there)

Lays down on bench, thinking (he was right here)

Thinking* (come to think of it)

Stands up*, grab a bus stop sign*, drags it and put it on the other side*

Thinking*(now I can see his face)

*beep beep (alarm ringing)*

Kaoru: looks at her watch*

Thinking* (I suppose our time will never coincide one another’s)

At Sato’s home:

Amaya: oh Sato you’re back.

Sato: tadaima (I’m home)

Hiroshi: okaeri (welcome home)

Amaya: so tell me what happened?

Sato: nothing much, oh by the way I found and listened to a great vocalist

Hiroshi: oh really where?

Sato: it’s a special place so I can’t and won’t tell you

Hiroshi: what??!!!

Sato: I’m going to my room

Hiroshi: Sato!!

Sato: laughing* (hahaha)

Amaya: leave him alone.

Hiroshi: ok.

Amaya: But it’s been a long time since I’ve seen him talking about something with a real happy face it’s not like he’s faking it.

Hiroshi: yeah.

At koji’s place:

4:00 am*

Beeps 3x
Koji wakes up and looks at the alarm clock*

At kaoru’s place:

Kaoru: I’m home

Ken: okaeri (welcome home)

Yuki: anything interesting happen?

Kaoru: nothing special other than I’ve got my very first fan (Smiles*)

Ken: whoa a fan, eh?

Yuki: is it a guy or a girl?

Kaoru: a guy

Yuki: so what’s his name?

Kaoru: ah, don’t know. Going to my room now…

Ken: oh ok, sleep right away…

The same day probably between 7:00-9:00

Ken: oops. Hey, do you plan to skip school again?

Misaki: hi, where’s kaoru?

Ken: she went to sleep just now. She’ll be mad if you wake her up.

Misaki: I’ll be fine

Ken: then go on up

Misaki: gotcha

Misaki: oh you made a new ultraviolet protection suit, auntie?

Yuki: it’s because her old one is too small now.

Misaki: well… I don’t think she’ll want to wear it.

Yuki: unfortunately I know that. That aside Misaki-chan, this is a bit hard to say…..

Misaki: hmmm?

Yuki: … but don’t eat the stuff from the fridge too freely, ok?

Oonishi Yuuta (friend no.1 of koji): ahh, it’s rare to see a guy take so long and still not improve.

Kato Haruo (friend no.2 of koji): but he loves it so much that he can’t help it.

Yuuta: ah, right it’s about time…. UWAH! IT’S TEN!

Haruo: GET UP KOJI1! We’re going to be late again!

Koji: WHAT?

Riding motorcycles*

Kaoru looks outside her window*

Misaki: what are you looking at?

Kaoru: nothing in particular

Misaki: are you going to sing again tonight?

Kaoru: yeah
Thinking* (to me singing is the only thing that I live for.)

Kaoru playing guitar*

Glances to her right and sees koji*

Kaoru: thinking* (eh? No way…. It’s him)

Misaki: what’s wrong?

Kaoru: thinking* (oh no, what should I do?)
Thinking* (he’s going away)

Misaki: shouts* kaoru?!
Kaoru: looks around*
Thinking* (where is he? Where is he?)

Misaki: run* run* run*

Misaki: hey what’s wrong?

Kaoru: thinking* (where is he?) (Such a coincidence will probably never happen again.)

Thinking* (there he is!)

Koji: standing*

Kaoru: running then pushes koji*

Koji: wah?! , that hurts!!

Koji: wha─

Kaoru: I’m amane kaoru

Koji: stunned* eh what?

Kaoru: I’m amane kaoru

Koji: so?

Kaoru: my hobby is music, I’m a bit short-tempered, I’m 16, I live with my parents, I don’t have a boyfriend.

Misaki: catches up* pant* pant*

Koji:?

Kaoru: I’ve always looked at you. I’ve always looked at you. I don’t have a boyfriend.

Koji: eh?

Koji: ah, I see
Thinking* (that’s what it is)
Um….

Kaoru: I’ve never had one

Meanwhile

Sato arrives at the usual place*

Sato: I thought she was going to play. I’ll just wait then.

Back to kaoru and koji

Koji: hold on a moment
Ah, retreating*

Kaoru: approaching*

Kaoru: my favorite animal is cheetah, banana’s are my favorite food.

Koji: no, well…

Kaoru: there are too many musicians that I like. Who should I pick as my favorite?

Koji: wai….

Misaki: runs towards kaoru and koji*

Misaki: shouts* kaoru
Shove*

Misaki: I’m really sorry

Kaoru: eh? Wh…

Meanwhile:

Sato: she’s still not here; well I can play for a bit.

Opens bag* then brings out a violin*

Sato: thinking* (I brought it with me hoping we could play together)

Back to Misaki and Kaoru

Kaoru: hey, what the hell? Don’t get in my way!
Misaki: don’t get in your way?

Misaki: just now I saved you from trouble.

Kaoru: eh?

Misaki: don’t eh? Me. You we’re at the point of being rejected just now.

Misaki: jeez, what do you mean bananas are your favorite food? That doesn’t count as a profile at all.

Kaoru: you’re so annoying, turns away*
Thinking* (I thought that it was the only chance I’d ever have)

Kaoru and Misaki going back home (Kaoru’s house):

Sato: she’s still not here, looks at his watch*, well maybe I can still wait a while longer.

Misaki: oh yeah, I got to go back to my house for I have to get something, don’t worry I’ll still go to your house after.

Kaoru: ok

While kaoru is walking back she hears a musical instrument being played*

Kaoru: thinking* (where?), (impossible!), (at the place?), (but who?)

Kaoru arrives at the place*

Kaoru: ah, so it’s you.

Sato: you’re late
Serious face*

Kaoru: sorry

Sato: laughing* (hahaha)

Kaoru: huh? Why are you laughing?

Sato: no need to say sorry, I’m a fan. I should’ve known what time you’re going to be here.

Kaoru: still I did tell you that I was going to be here, so sorry, and um I also didn’t tell you what time so sorry again.

Sato: well I expected it to be in the evening.

Kaoru: why?

Sato: um, let’s say it’s a hunch.

Kaoru: so you can play the violin, huh?

Sato: um, yeah, am I good enough?

Kaoru: very good actually.

Sato: thanks, want to play together?

Kaoru: sure

Time passed unnoticed

10:30 pm

Beep 3x from cell phone

Sato: oh it’s already time.

Kaoru: time? for what?

Sato: um, evening vitamins.

Kaoru: thinking* (evening vitamins? Should I take 1 too?)

Sato: takes pills from pocket*

Sato: oh got to have water, um is your house near? Can we go there? Oh I don’t want to intrude, can you just bring me a glass of water?

Kaoru: um ah sure, just wait here.

Sato: dropping to his knees*
Thinking* (why now? Why here? ) (I got to leave before she sees me.) (I’ll leave her a note though) writing note* then runs real fast*

Back to kaoru:

Kaoru: arrives at the place*

Kaoru: huh? Where is he? Oh he left a sheet music/book and there’s a folded page.
Opens folded page* sees a note*

Note: sorry for leaving my idol, my father called and told me to go home immediately. I’ll be back again tomorrow.

Sincerely yours,
No.1 fan

Ps. Email me though, singmeasong_17@czweb.ne.jp

Kaoru: singmeasong_17 eh? Laughing*( hahaha)
Thinking* (why not, tomorrow then.)

Sato: thinking* (I got to reach home fast!)
(Finally home)
(huh? I can’t breathe?)
Tries to reach the doorbell.
.
.
.

Amaya: who’s that? At this hour, probably Sato.

Hiroshi: definitely him, open the door.

Amaya opens the door*
Thinking* (huh no one’s here) (looks down)
Screams* ahhhhh

Hiroshi: Amaya? What’s wrong? What is it?

Amaya: hiroshi hurry up and call the hospital!

Hiroshi: looks down at the floor*
Oh my god!
runs for the phone and immediately calls.
Why?

Amaya: hiroshi, sato’s not breathing..


Pls wait for the continuation…