comments

[azia]

like i liked this short piece and i liked the theme and stuff..but too much nipples and stuff kinda awkward. mayb i jus dun like readin with thos kinda imagaes..i like sex images tho lol. i think it shud b longer..like after i read the description i tot it might hav more stuff happening. in the end i didnt really get it. like did she get bak with him?

[Angel Magic]

like i liked this short piece and i liked the theme and stuff..but too much nipples and stuff kinda awkward. mayb i jus dun like readin with thos kinda imagaes..i like sex images tho lol. i think it shud b longer..like after i read the description i tot it might hav more stuff happening. in the end i didnt really get it. like did she get bak with him?

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[otaku89]

i agree it waz a little short and da story left u out on a limb but the nude parts fit in well !

[fairplay]

I thought it was too cute!

[ILikePie1043]

it was ok, but it was kinda confusing cuz it was a short one-shot. =(

[bornfree321]

Will there be more to this. I saw the progression will be on going but when will they put out more to this tale?

[silverlily707]

So-so story I thought. It was okay but it was more about sex pictures and not a really strong plot to carry it through, wish it had a little more depth to the one-shot.

[blatenbroad666]

personally i thought this was just a weird maga.. i mean he rtotally warped her sense of everything.... and i really dont want to see another chick masturbate because i am a chick... i m sorry i think the whoe plot had more to be desired

[Mangoluve]

To be honest i thought that was boring. Id rather be reading something else than this.
I guess when youve read so much manga this typa stuff just gets boring.

And those nipples looked like the types that belong to Moms whove had babies and stuff...lol.

[CaramelChocs]

Not much of a story in there. I have to say though it's really weird with all her imaginations drawn out properly.